Come go with me

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Dec 15, 2009


Come go with me

Just beyond the horizon,
where man is no longer a pawn
on the chessboard of fate,
but a captain of his own destiny.

A full moon breasting ragged clouds,
as happiness splits wide a darkened sky,
illuminating a rosy hue of happiness,
in a showy display of blush.

Shedding inhibitions,
cleansing the spirit of past sorrows,
where forever is tattooed on the heart,
replacing scars of yesterday.

Love a misty rain,
replenishing scorched emotions
dried in the desert of longing,
parched desires ,exhausted by neglect.

Come go with me, paradise awaits
in the forest of forever, where I love you
is real, a broken heart doesn't exist,
compassion links devotion.

*contest poem written for the song Come Go With Me*

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  • 5 years ago

    by Rihanna

    An amazging poem

    Deffenitly deserved to win!!!! X

  • 5 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I wish I could have been around when this was nominated because I would have voted for sure. I love this piece and I think you really have penned something short, yet wonderful. Excellent job, fabulous piece.

  • Well deserved, win and amazing poem. (:

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 5 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Excellent piece, I really like how deep this piece is and honestly we all want paradise.

    My favorite part is...

    shedding inhibitions, cleansing
    the spirit of past sorrows, where
    forever is tattooed on the heart,
    replacing scars of yesterday.

    So touching and so true, because only cleansing of the spirit can allow new love and a healing for scars that have been afflicted.

    Great poem

  • 5 years ago

    by yogi73

    Great poem. I like the mix of sadness and hope. I think it really does a great job of touching a common human emotion of; hope for love.