Comments : Misconstrued Words and Distorted Choices

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Tabi,

    It is obvious how much you love you father:)
    I think parents love their children far, far more than their children are aware of. We have to be strict, because we want them to achieve the best they can and get out all of the life given to them. So, we do not show just how much we care, sweet girl;)

    Nice to read you again after such a long time.

    Happy Xmas and a very good New Year, I hope all is well and will get even better for you:)

    God bless you,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Ixora

    Great job on this poem I did mind the length at all as it kept my attention throughout. The emotions are almost tangiable and you speak of things unique to yourself but that can clearly connect to other readers.

  • 7 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I personally think pain and failure are two very key elements of growth. You learn more as you suffer and fail and it makes you stronger in the end. I enjoy your writing but sometimes I feel your trying to be to"impressive" with the words you use. Its almost as if you complicate your poems with unnecessary vocabulary. Sometimes just keeping things simple makes the poem that much stronger and impressive. Well done none the less