Moon Dance

by Lady Nik   Dec 27, 2009


Flashes of brilliance
swirl through the
star crossed sky
where movements reign.

Dragons with rainbow
scales soar from
land mass to seas
to oceans burned
from combustion
that are now sprinkles
of ashes.

The moon
ascends and the
music plays louder
making waves of ice
swing from left
to right like a mighty
pendulum predicting
the future.

Witches flick their wands
dipped in a hint
of nitroglycerin to the sound
of the moon's notes.
Supernovas start
to sing as the beat of
the night reaches its pinnacle.

*A challenge by Mysterious Charmer to write a fantasy poem using the words Pendulum, Rainbow, Combustion,Nitroglycerin and Star crossed*

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  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I just invisioned an orchestra in the heavens playing to ever noise, sound and bang you wrote down. Definately a tough topic to write about and use certain words at that but if you have the imagination for it piece of cake right :p haha 5/5 nice job

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    Those were really difficult words to use and i don't even think i could've done it! great job! this was different, but very unique and special in its own way! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    That was pretty amazing. Not only did you do a great job using those words for the challenge, but you also used perfect imagery throughout the entire poem. I dont usually go for fantasy poems, but this is an exception :) You dont surprise me when it comes to writing wonderful works. Loved it. 5/5
    --Kay Jay

  • 14 years ago

    by Mello193

    Pretty neat

  • 14 years ago

    by january friend

    I love the use you words in this and i love the title. "The moon ascends and the music plays louder making waves of ice swing from left to right" were the best lines in my opinion. it also makes you think of some amazing scenery when you read it

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