Nik, you did good with the challenge. Those were not easy words to use and have the wrote make sense but you did it. Well done.

Not only do you have a great imagination but your ability to put together words that arent necessarily related into one poem is quite remarkable. You rose to the challenge & wrote a wonderful piece.

I think you did a great job there..I admire your creativity however, after reading the first line of the 1st and 2nd stanza, i felt that the flow went bit out of the track...Just my opionion though..XD

"Flashes of brilliance
swirl through the
star crossed sky
where movements reign."

Loved the beginning, such few words are used but such big images are created. You keep it simple, without using a large vocabulary, and still grab the reader and pull them completely in.

"Dragons with rainbow
scales soar from
land mass to seas
to oceans burned
from combustion
that are now sprinkles
of ashes."

I liked the thought of dragons with rainbow scales, that was beautiful and creative. Well done so far, I am a big fantasy fan and you have captured the essence of it perfectly.

"The moon
ascends and the
music plays louder
making waves of ice
swing from left
to right like a mighty
pendulum predicting
the future."

Excellent how you incorporate not only sight but also sound into this.

"Witches flick their wands
dipped in a hint
of nitroglycerin to the sound
of the moon's notes.
Supernovas start
to sing as the beat of
the night reaches its pinnacle."

Lovely job my dear, and especially since this was a challenge. That would be quite difficult, random words that you have to string together to make sense.

Thank you for the read Nik and keep posting!

God bless you and Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

~MaryAnne

You really have met the challenge in fact you destroyed the challenge good job

I love the use you words in this and i love the title. "The moon ascends and the music plays louder making waves of ice swing from left to right" were the best lines in my opinion. it also makes you think of some amazing scenery when you read it

Pretty neat

That was pretty amazing. Not only did you do a great job using those words for the challenge, but you also used perfect imagery throughout the entire poem. I dont usually go for fantasy poems, but this is an exception :) You dont surprise me when it comes to writing wonderful works. Loved it. 5/5
--Kay Jay

Those were really difficult words to use and i don't even think i could've done it! great job! this was different, but very unique and special in its own way! :)

I just invisioned an orchestra in the heavens playing to ever noise, sound and bang you wrote down. Definately a tough topic to write about and use certain words at that but if you have the imagination for it piece of cake right :p haha 5/5 nice job