Lol. I must say that you did a wonderful job with this. The imagery was definately there; I felt as if I was watching an episode of some hilarious tv show as I was reading along. Ha. Great write eh. I gave it a 5/5.
Lol I sure like the pun side of the both of you. You girls must have one hell of a crazy night. Well what would the both of you have do, without each other. Well it's always nice to have a partner in crime.Thanks for sharing this lovely piece;)
Hahahaha!!! Isn't that the truth?! I gotta say, apart from the funny stuff, you also did a great job writing this! Making all of it rhyme and making it funny as well...you did a great job with that. Haha!
2 minute stop to the local 7-11
Came back, done in 5, that was far from heaven
Woke up the next morning our heads pounding hard
"What the hell happened last night retard?"
^this killed me....seriously. This is pretty dang funny.