Comments : Partner in Crime

  • 7 years ago

    by The Queen

    Lol.. very well written piece Chels..XD..Excellent portrayal of that funny scenes..lol. it made me remember the days when my bestfriends were here with me..Enjoy and love each other more!

  • 7 years ago

    by Angie

    Haha I remember nights like that and thank goodness they are behind me now lol. Great write Chelz, oh to be young again.... Have fun, enjoy life, build memories, be safe and treasure your friendship.

  • 7 years ago

    by KJ

    Lol. I must say that you did a wonderful job with this. The imagery was definately there; I felt as if I was watching an episode of some hilarious tv show as I was reading along. Ha. Great write eh. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 7 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Hahahaha that was wonderful!! Sounds like a blast, and makes me wanna go party with me bestie!

  • 7 years ago

    by january friend

    Haha. the title is what really makes this poem good. otherwise it was a good read, very funny. reminds me of a friend

  • 7 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    Haha that was funny. my best friends name is chelsea and i can definitely relate to the partners in crime part. this was really entertaining to read! thanks! :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Emily

    Eeeeee! i love you best friendddd! lol
    ...i laugh every time i read itt

  • 7 years ago

    by Lu

    Auhhhhhhhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuuh

    There are just some things in this piece a Momma just shouldn't read ... lol *covers eyes*

    Awww my darlin' is growing up. Soon she'll be married, have a zillion kids and no longer need Momma :(

    But she still will always be my A.I..D
    Muahhhhhhhhh

  • 7 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Haha this was funny. We need more poems like this. Not as serious and depressing but still written with form and style. Very creative piece and very refreshing to read. I enjoyed this. Nik :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Not to sure about the non condom thing with our enemy A.I.D.S around but we have all been there. Could have been funny though it was a good effortt but the fear factor is to obvious 4/5 Ray S

  • 7 years ago

    by Faithless

    Lol I sure like the pun side of the both of you. You girls must have one hell of a crazy night. Well what would the both of you have do, without each other. Well it's always nice to have a partner in crime.Thanks for sharing this lovely piece;)

  • 7 years ago

    by nmdoza

    Aw aha, this was a fun but very relatable piece. i actually felt the rush and excitement of a very drunken night.

  • 7 years ago

    by nmdoza

    Aw aha, this was a fun but very relatable piece. i actually felt the rush and excitement of a very drunken night.

  • 7 years ago

    by Lori

    Hahahaha!!! Isn't that the truth?! I gotta say, apart from the funny stuff, you also did a great job writing this! Making all of it rhyme and making it funny as well...you did a great job with that. Haha!

    2 minute stop to the local 7-11
    Came back, done in 5, that was far from heaven
    Woke up the next morning our heads pounding hard
    "What the hell happened last night retard?"

    ^this killed me....seriously. This is pretty dang funny.

    I'll give it a 5/5 for making me crack up :) :)

    Great write!!