Very sad and the last line strikes the reader so heavily, that it takes the wind out of them. this almost made me cry, you really dig far into the readers heart with this one, at least you did with mine. really dont know why but you really had that strong effect on me with your words. very nicely done.
Yes, I have read quite a few of your poems and this is different...a good different though. You did a great job with the ending, it is wat I liked most about it. Also, in all your works, I notice that you use your own format. And I love that. I am still trying to break out of the normal 'four line stanza' type poem. But overall, beautifully written Nik. 5/5 (you deserve nothing less). Great write.
This was really heartbreaking but so beautiful to read. it had a ton of emotion and pain in the entire thing. great job!
"How could she forget
the special moments they
had once shared?
The laugher that is
now a few miniature
molecules in the back
of her throat"
Love is such a hard thing to figure out and get used to. I mean once you find it and you're happy you can only help but think one day they'll be gone forever. I think it would be extremely hard to be around the person you love most in the world everyday watching them die, but thats definately love. I like this style you have here its like a free form of thoughts which is always good. Told a pretty strong story but a very true one at that. Nicely done worthy of a 5/5