Comments : Your Special Box. xx

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    This poem is really sweet,

    I enjoyed reading the rhymes, they didn't feel force.

    There is just one little typo, I think.

    "I know its took a little while"

    Its.. I think the "s" shouldn't be there.
    It took a little while.

    Other than that, I like it. It has sentiment on it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Aww, I feel so special haha

    I'm the only one who has comment on it, except that Everlasting up there.