Seriously good and very funny. It threw me off track to start with thinking it was a macabre piece until I got to the last couple of lines,
Definitely a 5/5.

Very funny with a great surprise ending. Did he kill the spider? lol

I really liked the poem. Turning from feelings of dread to a light hearted laugh was great.

LOL this was adorable and surprising. I loved it, thanks for the smile and sharing your humor with us
Connie

This is dark yet funny at the end when its,about the spider of course. I like the sharp, short sentences as it allures' to the spiders attack.

Great job, Em

Hahaha, you got me there.
An arachnophobic made me forget all of my worries today...
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Suddenly she turns
And sees him before her
Dad, dad, she screams
Please, catch this spider.

these lines stood out.

Well done

Gel