Comments : Past Haunts (Musette)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Such few words can speak so loud & be so powerful. This did just that -- the past can be very haunting in one's future. Very true indeed -- well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Meena
    Wonderful job on the club challenge :) So much sadness portrayed in each word.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Screams pray
    for punishment
    each day

    Now that i have tried this form myself, i can be honest while saying that this is tough yaar but you surely made it look so simple. I really liked the stanza above.

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Its hard to get away from the ghost of past... but then life is too short to remeber those moments... beautifully penned... very touching..

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    As usual you did a wonderful job with the form. It is sad with a powerful message.