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Beautiful work of art

Very good rachel..miss you cousin hope all is well

Firstly would like to congratulate you on your win, very well deserved one.

Though the whole poem was breathtaking but this last stanza was mindblowing

I never believed in ghosts
But I felt your touch
It was undeniable
Did you feel my regret?

You are a natural poet and this one is just a proof to that

all the best and take care

Rachel, First of all congrats on the win.

This poem was obviously very personal and I'm sure one you hold deeply to your heart. I canno't even begin to express the emotion I felt whilst reading. I felt the ache behind each line and I truely admire your heart for writing such a beautifully penned piece.

I never believed in ghosts
But I felt your touch
It was undeniable
Did you feel my regret?

The stanza above touched my heart. To me I felt a really close connection and bond. This poem was definitly one of the most powerful I have read by you..

An elegantly penned write by you. I hope this year gets a little better for you and your children each day.

-Mel

Congrats Rachel!