Intangible

by Rachel RTVW   Jan 13, 2010


Intangible dreams of happiness
Broken heart like a weight
With the strength of gravity
Can't we create our own destiny?

Solitary confinement
Prisoner of my own mind
Abyss of sorrow
Doesn't time heal all wounds?

Words left unspoken
Your tomorrow...... stolen
Literal heartache
Can angels hear one's thoughts?

Unanswered questions
Haunted by memories
Reminded by my subconscious
How can life be so cruel?

I never believed in ghosts
But I felt your touch
It was undeniable
Did you feel my regret?

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  • 7 years ago

    by Andrew

    Beautiful work of art

  • 7 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very good rachel..miss you cousin hope all is well

  • 7 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Firstly would like to congratulate you on your win, very well deserved one.

    Though the whole poem was breathtaking but this last stanza was mindblowing

    I never believed in ghosts
    But I felt your touch
    It was undeniable
    Did you feel my regret?

    You are a natural poet and this one is just a proof to that

    all the best and take care

  • 7 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Rachel, First of all congrats on the win.

    This poem was obviously very personal and I'm sure one you hold deeply to your heart. I canno't even begin to express the emotion I felt whilst reading. I felt the ache behind each line and I truely admire your heart for writing such a beautifully penned piece.

    I never believed in ghosts
    But I felt your touch
    It was undeniable
    Did you feel my regret?

    The stanza above touched my heart. To me I felt a really close connection and bond. This poem was definitly one of the most powerful I have read by you..

    An elegantly penned write by you. I hope this year gets a little better for you and your children each day.

    -Mel

  • 7 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congrats Rachel!