Tangerine Morning. [Rictameter]

by Courageous Dreamer   Jan 16, 2010


Prisms
of tangerine
penetrate lucid shades,
glowing upon my vacant face,
awakening eyes of lingering dreams,
as a new day blossoms to life-
through dancing shades of nude,
multi-colored
prisms

Rictameter: Syllable count --2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2.
Lines 1 & 2 are the same.

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  • 6 years ago

    by GorqeousDisaster

    5/5 wonderful, i love how i could imagen everything you were writing (: well done! love it!

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Awakening eyes of lingering dreams

    haaa ! u got the power lol...5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Cool

  • 7 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Oh Temps, congratulations times a million! I just viewed this piece and felt a sudden piece, the rictameter, and the way you wove such beautiful words into it, was soothing and inspiring. A stunning piece of work from you dear, well worth the win of course.

    God bless you!

    ~MaryAnn

  • 7 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Congratulations on your win dear.. :)

    I still couldnt try this form....its a real challenge for me but u surely did it very smoothly, loved it...spl these lines

    as a new day blossoms to life-
    through dancing shades of nude,
    multi-colored
    prisms

    awesome selection of words

    all the best and take care

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