Comments : Until dawn calls (Rictameter)

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Wow..I liked this Meena!

    Pregnant moon, diamond studded sky mmhhhh..what beautiful wording!

    This piece is a diamond as well, good luck on the contest:)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The imagery and flow of this Rictameter is outstanding

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Meena
    This is a breathtaking poem. your imagery and word choices have brought such a smooth flow to the words. The images it creates for the readers mind are beauty in themselves.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy
    btw. great job on the poetry form challenge :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    How beautiful, such vivid imagery you have painted for us. loved the pregnant mood part, that was definatly original & stood out to me. wonderful .