I love when a line is repeated in a stanza. It makes it much more powerful, like you're really trying to get your point across..
This piece is so relateable, you described feelings that so many of us out there are feeling..

I absolutely loved this. And as Yakari said, you ended it with a sense of hope. Beautifully penned.
Chelsey

So sincere and straight from the heart, the best kind!
A mere moment
can touch one
for a lifetime
If only you believe...
this is so true, sometimes we don't realize it until the moment is gone. an excellent write.

Rachel
Once again you have brought me to tears.

Perhaps a broken heart
may get a moment to rest
Safe in strong arms
If only................

Close your eyes and let the memories come back into your mind....you can be there again...if even for a moment.

I love you
Aunt Cindy

Nice work!

Awe nice i love it