Comments : Take my hand and I will never let you down

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I once lived in a town much like the one you write about, wouldn't see more than 10 people after nine o'clock. The lights that shine brightest or are most noticable are street lights and I like how you compared that in your poem to wanting to "go" or being able to. All love needs is some time to grow but most people quit long before it blossoms. Excellent job 5/5