Comments : Destiny Unkind

  • 14 years ago

    by Deana

    An excellent write , life can be so unfair at times, grief is the hardest of all things to bear! very well put together!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Rachel
    I wish you were here so I could give you a big hug. I know your pain.

    Destiny unkind to me
    Dream's been torn apart
    Memories of the love we shared
    Tattooed upon my heart

    These feelings are so hard to deal with. The pain is so hard to find relief for. I have been right where you are. The pain doesn't go away Rachel.....instead it will become part of who you are.

    These crossroads we have reached
    Yet I still can't say goodbye
    Grief is not an easy thing
    Relentless tears won't dry

    You never have to say goodbye. The ones we love live within us. The tears will always come....with everything you see that reminds you of your loved one. A song, a place, a childs smile. remember I'm here whenever you need me....I love you honey.
    excellent poem. Full of so much sadness.
    Aunt Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Knowing a love you once shared with someone no longer remains is never the easiest to deal with. I think many have experienced your pain & can relate to your emotions here. Well done, very well expressed & a great flow.