Comments : Written In Ink (Lira)

  • 7 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Meena,

    you are an extremely talented writer and it shows in this verse.

    I especially like the line Blind beliefs wait by the shore"

    well done.
    shobhana

  • 7 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Meena,

    you are an extremely talented writer and it shows in this verse.

    I especially like the line Blind beliefs wait by the shore"

    well done.
    shobhana

  • 7 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Fate is definatly an interesting topic & one that is interesting to hear the thoughts of others on. I loved the ending, how fate is written in ink and can't be altered. Nicely done.

  • 7 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I liked this piece a lot dear :) Very well done. Shobhana is write, you're a very talented write. Loved this :) Nik

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Meena,

    The Lira is a short and lovely format and I know from experience it's difficult to make a short poem like this interesting to read.

    You succeeded however and gave the reader al lot to ponder upon.

    I too believe that the course of our life is already known and we get to fill in the little details, the ones that make us unique.

    Well done:)

    God bless,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Very nice and very short - even better. I think this work of your is very well penned and the words chosen seem to fit perfectly! Bravo!

  • 7 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wonderful job on the Lira Meena
    I really love this form. It allows so much to be said in so few lines.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy