This girl's last words

by just a poet   Jan 28, 2010


She could not lose her emotion,
That is what drove her heart,
But it was slowly dying,
She was suffocating,
She did not see the point of life,
She could do nothing right.

She was told that she had no right to be mad,
It was her own fault that things had turned out so bad.

They do not care if she cries,
They do not care that she doesn’t want to survive,
As long as they can have the final word,
There fine.

She does not wish for death.
She does not avoid it.
Her life is already over,
Her freedom has been taken,
Her death has arrived.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    As long as they can have the final word,
    There fine. --> excellent. if this was a rap song, this would be the powerful part of the rhythm.

    Her freedom has been taken,
    Her death has arrived. --> the living dead

    Lovely. see more soon, yes?
    -Rainy