Comments : The Mountain

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Extraordinarily beautiful 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Fran

    Where I live I'm surrounded by mountains and cannot imagine life without them. Your poem is a wonderful hymn to their majesty. I particularly liked the lines "Adorned with fire,
    Lit by the Gods". So very true! Smiles.

  • 13 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Wonderful poetry, most of your work reeks of awesomeness to put it bluntly.

    "Her majesty beckons
    Fog lingers and softens her brilliance,
    for just a moment...
    Then she stands stately, like a queen
    Adorned with fire,
    Lit by the Gods"
    ^
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    WOW

    5/5 and kindness from a fellow reader/poet!=D

    Dean-x

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    A very beautiful write. I liked the poem start to end.

    5/5