Wow.. I'm really speechless you two did a fantastic job here . No criticism or thoughts can express this piece as a whole. It was brilliant. Definitely a poem worthy of nomination .

A lovely read penned by the two of you..well
done :)

This poem is worded beautifully and I cannot point out a favorite stanza.

I love the message that is in it, for it's a very true one: we are the only enemies of this earth and it's inhabitants. We disrupt the natural course of most processes and cannot even make our own run smoothly. Even animals know better than to keep making the same mistakes..but we do, because we are the dumbest creatures that ever lived.

Good work Joe and Melody:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

Not much I can add to the other comments. This is a seamless collab as it should be and the message is powerful. Well done to both of you.