Your title could be the 1st few/couple words in your sentence like "My life"

A very emotional piece! the structure was perfect and all the stanzas flowed into each other perfectly =] The despair you feel is evident with every word you write and you portray it beautifully

This so touched my heart to read... Lol. Maybe because I can relate... and have been there. A deep poem so sadly, but well expressed. Your poems also have great rhtyhm and rhyme that make them shine :) You're a shine :) Lol.... Thankyou for such a heartfelt poem, and wish you all the best...

Lol,
Olwin.