True word from the heart ..Ending our lives..Truely sad but only our own pain we want to stop nothing else we see...Well done.

You take care and be safe
Donna

This isn't really something I would expect from you. Chatting I found you very .. full of life. Sad poem, I hope this doesn't depict your life

Not too bad for a short one, try not doing it all in caps though. Takes away from the lines.

Not too bad for a short one, try not doing it all in caps though. Takes away from the lines.

Well written, short but powerful:)

I would switch "In your life I will no longer be" to "I will no longer be in your life"

the original seems forced, and some of the best advice given to me was to not be afraid if something didn't rhyme:)

great read

Jessie