Comments : Shower

  • 14 years ago

    by Sadespair

    I like it had a nice easy flow...
    Which means I had to read it twice to know what I read haha.
    But My favorite line of all the one I feel connects to me is as follows;

    "Saturating my hair
    With thoughts of strife and pain
    Then sending them away
    On down to the drain"

    And Thank you for sharing(:

  • 14 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Very strong words, I loved the story you told, although sad.
    It makes me curious, ya know?
    Where is this person? what happened? what kind of day did he have? What does he do next?

    Great poem, truly so.
    5/5, well deserved.
    because this piece spoke to me.

  • 14 years ago

    by Tori Hicks

    Ah...
    this poem describes most of my nights lol :)
    very well written

    comment mine please? :)

  • 13 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I love how all your poems are smooth to read, if that makes any sense. Another winner^_^

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    U had a realy nice idea over here,,, i love the form and the word choice u had here.

    u even made me wana shower when I reached the word cold...well done
    u have an imaginative mind

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by victoria

    Absolutly loved this poem. Very vivid and emotional. i could see the emotions of stress just wash away and then all of sudden come back to reality.

    victoria