Comments : Not Master of my Mind

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I added this to MY FAVORITES. this was beautiful. i loved the raw emotion and deep feelings in it.
    "My lips betray me by saying the opposite of how I really feel. Love is my addiction yet heartache puts me to sleep, Misery is my foundation and anger my retreat. I stare I look appalled at my own reflection, Who is this impostor I see who has stolen my elation."
    i absolutely loved these lines that words can't even describe. amazing job! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Mazie

    This is definitely my favorite. its amazing. i can't even describe how i feel about this poem. very very good job. :]

  • 13 years ago

    by hayden

    I really enjoyed this, but what i get is that this is a reflection of yourself. Have more faith in societ and yourself.