Beautifully worded... wonderfully penned...
the edning is so powerful...

Short yeat powerful =]
Your chioce of wording was very strong and this was a very well written piece! nice imagery created to 5

It was short, but it had a ton of emotion in it. i liked it a lot. your word choices were very strong. great job!

Superb imagery and powerful words;
such a beautiful poem.
5/5

Whoa! First I loved the title. Claps for that. Second the first line is AMAZING! I had to read it like five times before I could finish the poem. You write with such intense words and emotions. I love it. Great work indeed. -Nik