Comments : Wake up

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I knew a girl in high school who wore long sleeves all year round and would always cover up her arms. You never know much about people even if you think you do I guess, its easy to hide behind a smile. Never understood why people who were supposidly in so much pain already would hurt themselves physically. A couple spelling mistakes but nothing worth down voting for. Nice job it felt really real like you were writing about yourself but I guess we'll never know 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by momopixie18

    Relatable, i like how your thinking to yourself how it could happen, and made the reader feel the confusion