Comments : Hourglass

  • 14 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Liked the way you ended it.. and left it open .. without a full stop nor a question mark.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is a whole lot of questions in this world
    that needs answering but sometimes we are left with none..another good write, leaving
    room for the reader to ponder..

  • 14 years ago

    by Kelianne

    I love that ending! the feeling builds up throughout the entire thing and then you throw it all out there at the end. very good =)