1st of all the title just makes u want to read "mushroum umbrella" i loved the way u used ur imagination there...

faires and how they hide from the rain, under the mushroum... it almost sounded like a cartoon,

you have a talent, and let it grow!!

ANG! OMG hahaha this made me smile! This was so magical, and child like! I loved it! You can pen just about anything and make a great piece of poetry out of it can't you? I agree with Robie! The title first made me think wtf? lol then as I was reading, I was like where is this going??..and I absolutely loved where you went with it! You're an awesome poet! You've been on my favorites since I started this site 6 years ago!

Simple yet vivid...very well written and could almost see the entire thing before me. Great job!!

This was absolutely one of the most creative and fascinating writes I have come upon. Just from the title I knew I would be in for a fun and imaginative tale, I was. Thank you for sharing your beauty in such happy words, I enjoyed it greatly!

Thank you also for the nomination on my poem "Liberty Dust", I appreciate it very much.

God bless you and take care always.

~MaryAnne

Very nice -I read it slow and twice. I read it out load. It was nice each time and comfortable for my lips to recite. bravo :)

Lol this made me giggle. like a little silly girl hahaha wow. nice write angie! i like the vivid descriptions. though they are simply put it plants a perfect picture!!!! :)