Comments : HYOHAKUSHA

  • 7 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Unique and thought provoking. I love the imagery and your use of metaphors. Excellent word choice that just adds to the originality. Great job!

  • 7 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I have to agree with both commenters. It is unique and thought provoking, nice images. I am glad that I saw it and read. Well worth it. Good job.

  • 7 years ago

    by Krathia

    Excellent. Thank you for writing this gem.

  • 7 years ago

    by Viola

    And let the moon baptize
    you in it's lustral light.

    ^The image I got out of that is profound. I've always been amazed by your writing. It's refreshing and capturing the way you string words and ideas together. I love it. Great work.

  • 7 years ago

    by Viola

    And let the moon baptize
    you in it's lustral light.

    ^The image I got out of that is profound. I've always been amazed by your writing. It's refreshing and capturing the way you string words and ideas together. I love it. Great work.

  • 7 years ago

    by silvershoes

    This is striking, powerful & gorgeous. I miss reading your work... it's been years.
    Please continue to write, for your talent is a gift.