Comments : Battle

  • 14 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    The heart has the ambition
    So Im left in a condition
    To picture such a position

    Say word i dig this keep it up

  • 13 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hmmm.. A fellom South African, howzit man? I read your poem, the rhyming read like something out of a rap song and had a fart rhythm to it, good one, just watch the spelling and keep them coming. Grant

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    The battle to be yourself really nice poem :) 5/5