Time, Immortal (Shape Poetry)

by Lonely Rider   Mar 11, 2010


.....P
.......E
.........N
............D
..............U
.................L
...................U
......................M
..................Rhythem
............unceasing, ....... of
......immortal hours, footprints
....buried under grains of sands,
.some preserved, some revisited,
...for .... forever... and...a...day,
......Chimera..of fake.....reality,
........broken.....by.... wooden
.............outline of time.

...................................P
..................................E
................................N
..............................D
............................U
...........................L
.........................U
.......................M
..................Pristine
..........lake...of.....moments,
.... icicles of memories formed
...in yester's space, few dribble
..in present,leaving a trail across
..time. Awaits untouched images
...shadowed.....by... silhouette of
.......unknown,...bridged...by
.............undying time.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    OUTSTANDING Raj!.... lLol. And a very well deserved win :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    you did a awesome job on the form. But it is your words that touch the reader the most.
    Excellent!
    Congrats on your win!
    Love Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Congrats deary :) this was a wonderful poem and I'm so glad it won. Job well done :) Nik

  • 8 years ago

    by The Queen

    Congrats on your win..:-)

  • 8 years ago

    by The Queen

    A very smart write from you. Loved the depth descfiption of yesterdays, it triggered some things that were left behind. EXCELLENT PIECE from you..:-)