Comments : The little red pill

  • 13 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This poem would sing better if you put the word red in the last line < thats what you
    get when you trust a little red pill> 5/5
    as far as being gilable, we all are at sometime, the secret is to learn from your
    mistakes or you will repeat them,its that
    easy don't put it in your body and no more
    problem. its that simple.

  • 13 years ago

    by LoVeLiFe

    I agree, I will edit it to make it sing better and as far as i'm concerned I am never doing that shit again.

  • 13 years ago

    by SHORTY25

    Hey I like your poem. I added you on my favorites. Just out of curiosity what's the little red pill