You think you know him

by Renee Murdock   Jun 17, 2004


You think you know him all to well
you think hes not that way
But once he gets what he wants
He'll rip your heart away.

When this happens
it'll hurt like hell
Your sorry hes the one
for whom you fell.

You ask yourself
why he does this
While you wish
He'd never exist

Take back all the love
you thought you felt inside
Take back the one in which
you thought you could confide.

But you open your eyes
and still feel all the pain.
You look in the mirror but all you see,
are the tears that fall like rain.

Your sitting there thinking,
what the fuc* am i gonna do
When all hes thinking is
ha ha i really used you.

So think of this
when he comes near
So you'll never
have to cry those tears.

***If you guys would comment on this poem i would greatly appreciate it...i know I'm not the only one going through this and thats why i need your help...thanks again***

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  • 18 years ago

    by Renee Murdock

    thanks danny

  • 18 years ago

    by Danny

    be strong and you'll get through it, i like the rhyme scheme

  • 19 years ago

    by Renee Murdock

    Well thanks for your comment xtraptxlitlgirlx...it really meant a lot to me... i love it when people comment on my poems!! you should read the other ones!! Thanks again!
    Renee

  • 19 years ago

    by Renee Murdock

    Hey bonnie...i was happy to hear from you again...its been awhile and uhhhh....i feel so f**kin high still...oh wait...you dont know about that...you have to call me and i will tell you about it...you are gonna freak out!!!

    *****$NLBC4$*****
    ****Renee****

  • 19 years ago

    by Renee Murdock

    Hey aja...i read all of your comments and im glad you read more than just one of my poems...i really apreciate you commenting on all of my poems...and i wold really like to talk to you online but all i have is an email...and i put it on another poem so you can go and get it from there...well thanks again....holla atcha gurl!

    ****Renee****