Beautiful! I loved this poem! I love it because it's so real and honest... and I know how it's like to suffer from losing a person you love and how you just want to write about your feelings but not really try to force a perfect poem..

Here are my favorite parts:

"Its not even been a whole day, though these hours have felt like years.

In this life built around darkness, you've always been my shining star..."

Amazing! Great job :)

This is exactly how I feel today, and for a long time after today...

Amazing job.

I know how you feel. Bf broke up with me the day before my bday. which is 2mar. You write with such passion. Its amazing. Keep writing. It helps ease the pain.

Brilliant poem. Every word flowed so smoothly. I am left with one request..... I WISH someone felt that way about me.

This is very well written i love it dont stop writing ever

Wow. Tears reached my eyes, as I came to the end of this poem. Well done, I like how your sentences are long, and aren't written down to look perfect. :) :)

Mouse.