This is amazing! beautiful flow, and great meaning.

loved it. was hooked on the first word!
well done.

Wow... I really enjoyed it! This is such a creative poem about poetry.. I love that about it. It was very original.. because you also wrote about the comments people make about poetry, especially "I can relate" because I write that sometimes too. It was very well written. Great job!

Wow. I don't know why, and I'm not sure it was supposed to be but this made me awfully sad. It brang tears to my eyes, I'm not sure if i was just over reacting, or just being myself but there was something about this that made my heart ache. Fabulous write, before I read this I thought it'd be another one of those poems when they aren't nothing special (for example; mine.) but after reading this. It captured me; whole. Well done:) xxxx

I have to agree with you. I too find it hard to believe a lot of the words I read and those I hear. Some people have a way of charming others into believing everything. I like the format and if I were you, I would change the F word and then move this to the life catergory. (smiles) I think more people would read it and benefit from it. Well done.

It was a little hard to read as it was not written in stanzas.

Also i would like to point out "Why don't you try an write and see if you feel the same..." an = and or to?

Other than those, i enjoyed reading this piece of yours. I think the message you were trying to convey was well pointed out. Well done.

Cody, this is the same poem but with breaking it into verses reads different. Gives the reader time to pause and enjoy your words. Good job with the changes.

Hi cody, thanks for the message to come and read this poem...it was actually worth reading! i agree with what you have portrayed in your poem with your words...THIS IS AMAZING! 5/5.

i look forward to reading more from you.
wonderful write.

Love wat u said is true....u gatta write from the heart b4 u use ur mind!!!