I feel this is a well written love poem. The rhymes were good & it had a good flow. The
only thing I would suggest in my opinion is that maybe you could split it into verses..just an opinion. Overall liked the read :)

I have to agree with Meena on this. I liked the sentiments expressed and the flow is good, rhymes aren't forced. Would like to see it broken into verses, just makes it a little easier to read. Well done.

Wow. :O. Shocked again, haha and same old same old tears. Great write, they are worth the time, taken to read. :) 5/5

Wow ive never read something soo great its amazing im adding this to my favs. your words are soo powerfull and soo true. amazing poem..

Amazing! you make the words flow so nice and have managed to show how much passion you have for this girl in a short paragraph.. not easy to do! 5/5!