The Dream

by White Orchid   Mar 17, 2010


It's been awhile since I've seen you
still remembering that cold winter day
when you held my hand and said "it's okay"
the reality has set in
you're no longer here
the enemy took you away from me

but, every night I see you
see your wonderful smile
the way your skin glistens in darkness
you looking into my eyes, staring in contentment

the door slowly opens and I see your face
watching in disbelief as you draw near
hoping this moment can last forever
my fingers are getting closer to touch you
the moment passes me by

my eyes open, tears running down my skin
wanting you here to wipe them away
realizing that I had awakened
I rolled over slowly forcing myself back to sleep
hoping that you will come back to me

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  • 12 years ago

    by mira

    Wow i love that poem its so true and sensetive well done

  • 13 years ago

    by RynZelara

    Gonna go through and comment on all your poems with my thoughts.

    This....actually cut me at heart. Such emotion behind this poem, such sadness too. Very good from a writing perspective.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I agree with the people above. This was a very emotional piece and so well written. I felt like you put all your feelings out for us to read and you didn't hold back. For someone that's just starting you're blowing me away. Wonderful poem. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Tammi

    Love this so personal and it touched my heart for i lost my g/f 2 yrs ago and my father last year so i have these drems alot thanks for sharing ur work with us. 5/5

    Tammi,