Love this so personal and it touched my heart for i lost my g/f 2 yrs ago and my father last year so i have these drems alot thanks for sharing ur work with us. 5/5

Tammi,

I agree with the people above. This was a very emotional piece and so well written. I felt like you put all your feelings out for us to read and you didn't hold back. For someone that's just starting you're blowing me away. Wonderful poem. Nik

Gonna go through and comment on all your poems with my thoughts.

This....actually cut me at heart. Such emotion behind this poem, such sadness too. Very good from a writing perspective.

Wow i love that poem its so true and sensetive well done