Wowie sylvia, another new form... you are becoming an expert in different types of poetry :)

I loved this one... the inquisitive nature of kids and their innocence is so well expressed... lovely write...

Another form! LIke this form as well as the
message. Children need space to grow &
learn..beautifully said & you have used the
form well. Good job :)

I so loved this Sylvia.. and its words are so true Lol. Children have a wonderful sense of freedom that we should never stifle. Oh to be a child again! :) ... A wonderful read and an Excellent poem! Well done.

Very cool form, congrats on putting it together so well.

Sylvia
Awesome form. Beautiful poem.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

I dont know if its the same song, but there is a song from Season 1 of Dexter that involves a song called "born free". i think it might be the same song :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oK-IKrXjiF4&feature=fvw

very nice poem. made me think about how we all try and save our innosence.

Silvia,

The innocence of a child is the most precious thing of all. You captured this blissful state very well within your verse..

This week a campagne was launched in my country to try and have people speak up about child abuse going on with neighbours and such..I know it goes on and it is a worldwide problem. To take the innocence and the trust away from a young life is by far the biggest and most cruel crime in my eyes.

A really beautiful poem:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

This art you have crafted from your heart was so touching to mine, and made me envision myself later on as a mother or guardian of children. They are truly today's world and need to be protected, so many are abducted or taken advantage of, but you can really see God's smile upon their soul.

Brilliant portrayal, it was a joy to read!

God bless you and your family always.

~MaryAnne

Wow, your gift.. better word than talent in my opinion is amazing, incredible and unbelievable; the way every line in all your poems and lyrics just fit together perfectly is just unbelievable.
5/5