Hey, I really loved this collab of yours! The first sentence already captured me from the start, probably because of the word " 'Tween ". Gives this shakespearean feeling, to me at least.
From the title you couldn't tell that this poem was about love but you guys brought the concept in really smoothly and I really loved it. Continue writing!!!

Well ladies, I would love to go there to, to that special place..it seems like paradise to me, lol.

Nice work on the collab:)

God bless and a hug,

5/5 Ingrid