Beautifully penned! I love the picture painting imagery. Your word choice was articulate. You used enjambment well. I love your creativity and the fact that you added the little translation at the end. Excellent job!
I agree a very well deserved win. You had really awesome interesting imagery throughout. Stale dream catcher was brilliant, as well as the raindrops becoming stone, there are too many to name that I found really well written. The flow was great & I couldn't stop reading. A brilliant piece of great quality.
I just read this book! 'Since I don't have you' and honestly it has so much to do with greeek I could do nothing but think of you the whole time.anywhoo my point being: you incorporate so much greek language into your poetry its just bloody amazing.and so like so diffeerent .really out of this world ,weird but beautiful;_