Comments : Wasted Wonderland

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    Impressive! I am at aww with what you have written. A very sad piece with so much sadness and lost of hope. The imagery as well just makes it all that much better as the reader can see what is going on and understand how the writer feels.

    "Callused hands hold rope
    Alarmed eyes search the skies
    Lackluster skies, streaked with grey
    Lift and pull, she must hide."

    This line once again proves my point of very nice Imagery "Lackluster skies, streaked with grey". A good poem from start to finish. Many ideas going through the readers mind as he or she reads it. Good job and keep writing.