Ahh...cupid i believe is the devil in disguise. After all love is the slowest form of suicide. I really liked the concept of this poem. i really enjoyed the beginning and how you did that twist at the end where you plead insane. wonderful job.=]

victoria

Again there is a lot of changes in presentation If it is any comfort many of us have been tormented by cupid as I point out in my featured poem infatuation

Another good piece! I really like the title you placed on this poem, and how you started this with "oh cupid you little devil". That first line drew me in completely because it was different, and the way it seemed like this piece was going intrigued me!

"we fought and we fought,it faded
and it died,no more pain,nor no
more kisses in the rain. "
- I really liked this stanza, however i think the "nor no" is a little bit awkward. However that didnt mess with the piece much. I still loved it all the same.

"I please insane"
- Great for an ending! loved this line here.

A sad but well written poem. Love is a wonderful thing, but we tend to get caught up in our messes and forget that you can always walk away, and say "enough".

A good story, it's a gift to read someone else's words so we can relate, but also make better choices for ourselves. 5/5

mandy :)

I really like this peice, 5/5

I plead insane.

what an ending.i would put this under angry poems...u knw ur tone here was so fitting with ur word choice..
ur last stanza b4 i plead insane.

didnt really made me expect ur last two words..so i loved ur power with words..

am getting impressed more and more..this is gd for ur lol

5/5

Very powerful

This is a great poem I can really feel your emotion

Very deep piece! there's nothing like pouring your emotions out on paper is there? this poem was interesting, i had to read it. especially since the title caught my eye.

i blame myself,for not watching
out,now i am confide in this
relationship yet you shoot me
at my neck,you made me fight
at war with my own heart.

my favorite stanza out of the whole poem. i really liked the last line.. "You made me fight at war with my own heart." very beautiful. However, always remember to check for spellin mistakes! & there's always a space after a common. otherwise, you did very well!

-Ashlei

It is pretty good, just make sure to use proper grammar and capitals.

It is pretty good, just make sure to use proper grammar and capitals.

I love the creativity in this with cupid. Props for that. Its pretty good just watch your flow.. it seems like the rhyming is kinda all over the place. It ruined the flow for me a bit. However a good poem overall :)

I love the creativity in this with cupid. Props for that. Its pretty good just watch your flow.. it seems like the rhyming is kinda all over the place. It ruined the flow for me a bit. However a good poem overall :)

Great poem :) I really liked the end although it is sad. Good job :D

Awesome, work on the flow a little in some parts, but its really good. i especially love the last line, very cool :)

Awesome. My favorite of yours so far. Makes me want to read on. I like the feeling.

You are really good. Very easy to relate to this one :) keep up the awesome job <3 5/5