I like it, a lot.
It has really good flow.

This is a nice poem..neatly written =) 5!

Nice writing ! loved the wording.

but i am against such stupid wars. in which innocents are killed more than the guilty ones.. i know you are confused about the orders u have to follow. but as a human we should know what is right , and what is wrong. thats why we are human... we have been turned into puppets. Created Monsters. dont mind brother but these wars are not for the greater good.. they are just for their personal reasons..

Pretty sweet i like it alot good job i especially like the ending.