Kay
this is a awesome piece. The form is really great. Your imagery and word choices bring so much life to your words.

Steadfast, tending guard,
with no guarantee.
Death, in all its beauty,
watching over me.

This was my favorite part. Sad yet so beautiful.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Outstanding piece, this is just simply awesome. Beautifully written with great selection of words...loved this stanza

Adorn the granite yard
with memorials in stone.
Epitaphs lend account
to otherwise unknown.

Great write dear

all the best and take care

Dear Friend.... absolutely lovely with a bit of darkness to boot. Loved it. A unique form to write, haven't run across this one as of yet, but seems like a good one to try myself. Good to see you back....

Wow I was blown away with this write - nice. I hope my final spot will be described as well when the time comes. good job!!!