Comments : Breathing Spell

  • 7 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Creative and clever. Good flow and use of enjambment! Nice job!

  • 7 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Wow

  • 7 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Wow! That has to be one of the best poems I've ever read! It was so sincere, and I honestly felt like I was reading your diary or something. Lol Keep it up:)