Wow I loved this and the end

Please my love be quick.
Will you take from me my final kiss?

You started strong and ended strong,,,you can feel remorse, regret, sorrow, love and maybe longing
I loved this poem every little bit and it's worded greatfly with such deepness and meaning
Fantastic

Gaze diamonds upon me,
And let the colour melt be.
-amazing this is and sounds so delightful and beautiful I loved it
Also
Before awaiting in ignorant bliss

As there's so much I love it's all so wonderful an amazing and all my favorite everythings just perfect a very excellent peice and makes me think from this poem that you are a magnificent poet
10/10

My gosh I agree 100% with Innocent Fairy. She is so right about it all. This piece is absolutely amazing as is your talent. 5/5 but I wish I could give it much more