Comments : Crystal Mint Flower

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Joe, had to give you a 5 on this for the form and style of writing. It is a bit difficult to understand without really stopping to look up most of the words although after reading it several times, I think it is becoming clearer to me. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    I agree with Sylvia. I had to look up tons of words but again you have made an excellent poem. Hope to see more of this good work from you. Good job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I remember reading this and not really knowing the meaning behind some of the words , but I always like a challenge when I read poetry. But a challenge can be enjoyable as well, you can learn so much from it and it only helps you and the writer grow as a poet. We all learn from each other. Very nicely done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    What to say ?
    that title alone stood as poem.
    amazingly poetic !

    and then how u opened it was just interesting and incredibly catchy ..
    ur realy gd when ur taking nature into ur poetic side..

    While-ere oelliad freed
    constantly agazed anight
    incliping her fair labras.

    got some new vocabs for myself..haha
    enjoyed the read..and the reread lol :)
    5/5