Thought provoking and creative. It has a catchy rhythm and the great use of metaphors allows for many interpretations. A versatile piece, well done!

Congrats on the win you defently deserve it i love the play of gem stones representing the worlds lack of color, of diversty, and emotion
very beautiful

This is amazing! The imagery is absolutely beautiful and clear, and I loved it. Your rhythm is great! 5/5

I love love love this poem. The words are very heart stopping. Your very talented. These words have a deeper meaning than it seems. I had to read it a couple of times to get it, and the meaning was riveting.