Dude its awesome!! I loved it and again its actually one thats very sexually descriptive unlike most on here but it was amazing i loved it every line and detail mmmm it sounds so fun :)

Lmao who's next? Hahahah! Great job. A little to erotic for my taste but well written. :)

DAMN You really game it to her good
that sounds like you had alot of fun

Yay. This was indeed very tempting. Very descriptive. This is 7 years ago, and by my experience some of poets here feel akward when their erotic pieces are brought out and commented on. It's actually a good read in a good way. Nice to see an old member around too.