Needs of The Tears

by Sunshine   Jul 29, 2010


I need you like I have never been in-need
I need you as I walk these shallow streets,
as I climb these high mountains of my hardships,
my pains.

As I battle the currents against my rivers,
where with the tickles of the water
my tears get lost through the ripples.

I need you as the sky drenches over me
I need a shelter , and I need You that
shelter from winter to be.

I need you through my lonely days like an
unbreakable knight running behind the
sun-rays, even if winter smoothly moved on
with its loneliest, coldest, darkest haze
taking off everything on it's way,
I need you to stay.

Written 2010-07-23 kl 15:41

by: Rania Moallem

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  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    This was a very fast paced/moving poem and i liked that. it made me feel as if everything was happened too quickly, you eagarness in the piece, it was great!

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Geeeeeeeeeeeeeee! This made me smile so bright, the wording, the pace and just the feeling it gave me..Love is universal:)

    Good work on this sweetheart!

    *huge hug*

    Ingrid 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    We are definitely all in need of that one person who we can lean on during difficult times & just know they will aways be there. Nicely written

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    We are definitely all in need of that one person who we can lean on during difficult times & just know they will aways be there. Nicely written

  • 13 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was such a heartfelt write that captured my attention and portrayed every feeling and thought running across with your poetic ink. Wonderful to read, thank you greatly for your comment on my poem "Embrace Life" also, glad you enjoyed!

    God bless you always.

    ~MaryAnne

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